Monday, January 24, 2011

returned

good morning folks
david and i
returned back north
here to type
the progress status
check for completeness
completed under caffinated
conditions. springing adjectives
vetted stories without
revealing too many
personal opinions that
may seem negative.
virginia, you're weird.
period exclamation point.

crowd was large
they love music
we slow, emotive
you polite, obligated
us mediocre performance
you mediocre response
venue quite classy
staff so friendly
food love affair
hackensaw boys great
fast and faster
end of night
scary by wiry
psychopath communing between
here and darkness
snappy snap fingers

north carolina becomes
home again, the
cave as shelter
as friend and
welcoming gentle arms
crowd, you are
wonderful, responsive, happy
us: on our
game for certain
and certainly pleased
performance peppy, light
retold psychopath story
of yester virginia
laughs and smiles
night goes fast
money in hand
slaps on backs
encouraging words exchanged
goodbyes and laters
return engagement imminent

grimm

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